The Bahamas Writer - Issue #9  July/August 2002  

HURRICANE SPECIAL!

"Hurricane Lilly" 1996 (right)
Photo by Bruno Dittmar, Hobby
Photographer and Chef, Stella 
Maris Resort, Long Island, Bahamas
www.stellamarisresort.com

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CONTENTS
1. Article: "Hurricanes of the Bahamas: Past, present and future" by Dennis Dames (Bahamas)
2. Poem - "Hurricane" by George Major (Bahamas)
3. Article - " Hurricanes" by Art Montague (Canada)
4. Hurricane memories - Ann Victoria Dean (U.S.A.)
5. Successes
6. Writing competition
7. Writing Tip: Joanne Hoople (Canada)
8. Market News
9. Bahamas Writer Sections
10. Write the Bahamas Writer
 
1. Article: "Hurricanes of the Bahamas: Past, present and future" by Dennis Dames (Bahamas)
We are pleased to welcome writer and TBW forum member Dennis Dames. Dennis lives in Nassau, Bahamas, and has contributed this informative little article on hurricanes of the Bahamas. The article was described by fellow forum member Joanne Hoople as "flawless prose - not often found".

Web site: www.DennisDames.com Email Dennis at dpoetry2002@yahoo.com

HURRICANES OF THE BAHAMAS: PAST, PRESENT AND FUTURE by Dennis Dames

A yearly phenomenon of forceful winds; originating from the west coast of Africa, to the North Atlantic ocean, the Caribbean Sea and the Gulf of Mexico. The Bahamas is well situated in the hurricane zones mentioned, and every resident of the islands spends half of his or her lifetime in the hurricane season.

From June's beginning to November's end, the time of energized winds and their potential harm to human life and private property becomes a national and regional concern. Hurricanes have proven deadly and damaging throughout the region over the years, and The Bahamas too- has had its share of casualties and other related costs.

Generally, the season of violent winds and sometimes accompanying heavy rains- has been a sparing visitor to the islands. In recent memory, an attitude of hurricane curiosity, excitement and plain casualness has spread like wild fire throughout the Bahamian communities. Islanders for the most part enjoy hurricanes, because they can cause unceremonious holidays.

Information relating to hurricane watches and warnings are readily available nowadays. In the age of satellite technology, the movements of any system in and toward the region are as accessible as fry fish or chicken, but the deadly mentality: "…it's just another passing storm", dilutes the purpose of having crucial data available to ensure that lives are saved and property secured in a timely manner.

Education and the campaign of hurricane preparedness are ongoing during the storm seasons, and the island's population for the most part is well informed. Each year- the possibility of a major storm hitting The Bahamas increases, but that doesn't stop the love and appreciation of an island life and the rich existence of God's sunshine, crystal clear and multi colored seawaters, and the precious ocean sands of varied shades.

Hurricane readiness is the goal of all countries in the storm regions. In The Bahamas like everywhere else, "Be prepared", is the calling cry. Taking heed to those words is ceaselessly the wise thing to do.

Copyright ©2002 Dennis Arthur Dames

Note: You may distribute this Newsletter. Feel free to post it to your website or BBS if you like. However no part of this Newsletter may be reproduced in whole, or in part, without keeping the links within this newsletter active.

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2. Poem - "Hurricane" by George Major (Bahamas)
We are happy to welcome writer and TBW forum member George Major, from the island of Eleuthera in the Bahamas.

Joanne Hoople drew our attention to George's poem "Hurricane". She was particularly taken by its "tone and urgency".

Web site: www.tarpumbay.com Email George at gmajor.1@netzero.net

HURRICANE by George Major

I
Hurricane is raging
Lofty seas rise to new prominence
Bayfront houses in jeopardy
Of losing their lives
The gentle peaceful atmosphere
Disrupted by the panic
Of drunken men 
On company trucks
Their hearts filled with expedient
Emergency,
They reclaim themselves 
Through such community affairs
As hurricanes
No one judges on hurricane days
If all days were the same
We'd have a good society
Bundled nerves and anticipation
They rush out 
To discover the needy
Saving lives with their valiant efforts.


II
I am here chasing girls
Her wild sensual majesty
Milk white and lucid
Caring as no other
How can I forget her wet kisses?
The gentlest of hearts
In a woman
She rolls with Hurricane men
Lending all that she might
New home, new places, new people
With great love, beauty
And such great admiration
As Hurricane men 
Have ever know
Me, I was not prepared
But in my heart I knew
Everything was gonna be alright.


III
Let all valiant hell break loose
In the wild wind
I closed my door to the dark days and nights
Good God help us in the rain
And tragedy of a violent hurricane
The land shaking mass of wind
Will soon be here
This accepted occurrence
This wrath of a violent wind
This freak of nature
So strong
Unleashed like magic
On the winds of days
"This suckers comin,
Ya better batten up tight!"

Copyright © George Major

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3. Article - " Hurricanes" by Art Montague (Canada)

It's good to welcome back again Canadian writer and TBW forum member Art Montague. Art rediscovered this article that he wrote some years ago.

Web site: http://amontague.homestead.com Email Art at arts-place@rogers.com

"HURRICANES" by Art Montague

Hurricanes kinda jump out attya, and stay. Cloudbursts that don't stop. Forget tornados and cyclones -- whoosh, they're gone, but hurricanes have an obdurate relentlessness. They have attitude! I adventured through one as a youngster in Toronto, in the mid-nineteen Fifties. Hurricane Diane, the weather bureau called it. I was too busy delivering groceries on my bicycle to call it anything. 

Hurricane Diane came in Friday night, wind gusts and rain, but too late to bother me because my last box of groceries was delivered by six. 

Next morning I had to push my bike to work. The wind was up and the rain was in sheets -- when it wasn't, it was nearly horizontal in your face, blunt as Thor's hammer. I worked through to six that day, same as every other Saturday. But this was a much different day. This was a test. At least I saw it so. No pass/fail; no judges; no rules, and dammit, no crib sheet either.

I was soaked to the soul that day. Mostly I had to walk my bike, with the wooden box of groceries in the carrier. Nature was humiliating this twelve-year old big-time. In Toronto of the day, bike grocery deliveries had more status than bike newspaper deliveries. Here I was, King of the Hill, having to push my bike. It may as well have had square wheels. But I still one-upped the paperboy wimps. That day newspaper deliveries were suspended. I didn't learn that until Sunday though. Meantime, I ate humiliation, especially a few times when I had to cling to a large post to avoid being blown ass over teakettle down the street.

Not that I was a Boy Scout, but by noon I was helping older citizens do things like get across the street ankle deep in water because I'd figured out the timing of the winds. Mostly though, every bit of my eighty pounds of bones, muscle, sinew, and stubbornness went head to head with the wind. I didn't win, I survived.

Somewhere in Toronto, people died that day because of Hurricane Diane. I'd already delivered my groceries in blizzards and in humid summer heat. Diane was just another job hazard. People do what they have to do, according to their lights.

Copyright © Art Montague 

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4. Hurricane Memories:

We are delighted to welcome university professor/writer and TBW forum member Ann Dean, who lives in High Falls, New York. Ann teaches courses in autobiography and education and says: "Writing has always been an important part of my life and I can trace the interest back to early childhood when my father and mother (both British) read classic English children's stories to me. I 'wrote' and illustrated little books about mice, rabbits and cats and read them to my dear old Gran."

Ann shares her memories of Hurricane Betsy that hit the Bahama islands in September 1965, just a few weeks after she arrived in Nassau to teach (this is an excerpt from Ann's autobiography "Teacher Under My Skin"). Ann's email: deana@newpaltz.edu


"HURRICANE" EXCERPT FROM "TEACHER UNDER MY SKIN" by Ann Dean

Soon after school started, word came that Hurricane Betsy would make a direct hit on the Bahamas. We had eight hours to prepare for the storm. We scurried to board up the windows and doors of St. Francis School, the church and priory offices, the German doctor's clinic and the tall, wooden building where the priests lived. Finally, we turned to "The Bungalow" where the lay missionary teachers would stay. 

For two days and three nights, thirteen of us lived together, crammed into two rooms with no electricity and no running water. We subsisted on tinned sausages and peas. We kept sane by tracking the storm's path on a hurricane map. The radio signals, broadcast from the Miami Weather Station, were picked up sporadically on our small, battery-powered transistor and were our only connection with the outside world. During the driving winds and rain of the squally weather, we slept or played cards by candlelight. The Bungalow was musty, dark and frightening.

Then, during the seven-hour, dead calm of the "eye" of the hurricane, we ventured out to see what had happened. On West Bay Street giant palm trees were bent double, smaller trees completely uprooted and thrown haphazardly about the beach. The monstrous waves had pushed three feet of sand up on the road in front of the Ocean Spray Hotel and a small Triumph convertible sat upended, as if it were a toy car abandoned by a child. We stood on The Esplanade and stared at the grey, rippleless water, impressed by its incomprehensible, dormant power. Soon it was time to return to The Priory to "batten down" for the tail end of the hurricane.

When it was over, the island was whistle clean. The wooden shacks, abandoned cars, oil drums, old lumber and garbage that had been piled up in people's yards had vanished--sucked off the island's surface and sent out into the atmosphere by Betsy's powerful winds. The Bahamian people rallied and in a few weeks New Providence Island was restored to reasonably habitable condition. We were grateful for the return of drinking water, lights and indoor plumbing. Many of the Out Islands suffered irreparable damage and loss of lives. 

Copyright © Ann Victoria Dean

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5. Successes
RICHARD KRZEMIEN (U.S.A.)

Congratulations to Richard Krzemien (TheWriterAtWork.com), who has a comic
published in this month's issue of "The Writer"
- Page 11: "Survival tip #3".

Richard is a member of the Writers Guild
of America and he's in regular contact with TBW.


He says: "I'm proud that The Writer at Work comic has been published in a prestigious magazine like 'The Writer.' I'm also very happy they printed it in color, since color is funnier than black and white. Then again, Charlie Chaplin did okay and he lived at a time when the world had no color. So never mind!"

The Writer at Work comic can also be appreciated (Richard says "some people say loved"!) in Canadian Screenwriter Magazine. 

Richard's T.V. credits include Star Trek:The Next Generation; The New Twilight Zone; and "War of the Worlds"

You can view the comic at: www.TheWriterAtWork.com Email Richard at TheWriterAtWork@aol.com


LINDA ADAMS (U.S.A.)
Photo by Sears-Roebuck

Congratulations also go out to writer and TBW forum member Linda Adams, whose story "Clarity" will be published in Let Us Not Forget, an anthology about veterans.

The book will have a foreword written by Sen. Bob Dole and an introduction by Sen. Bob Kerrey. The anthology is scheduled to be published by iUniverse in September 2002.

 

Linda's web site: www.hackman-adams.com Email her at garridon@att.net

 

ART MONTAGUE (CANADA)

Congratulations to writer and TBW forum member Art Montague. Art's murder mystery "Gourmet Takeout" has been accepted for inclusion in Michael Bracken's anthology HARDBROILED, to be released Spring 2003. 

Art's web site: www.amontague.homestead.com Email: arts-place@rogers.com

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6. Writing competition
Australian writer and TBW forum member HOWARD SPICER (WritersDisplay.com) has launched a writing competition - "AN ESSAY OF SIGNIFICANCE". Prize (one only) - U.S.$1,000.

Competition details:

* A competition aimed at stimulating thought and discussion on any significant issue, situation or event in today's world.

* The essay must be at least 1500 words and no more than 2500 words in length. 

* Essays that do not carry the writer's copyright will not be accepted. 

*The competition closes on Oct 31, 2002.

*An international panel of judges will determine the best essay and submit their vote to the Moderator in Australia. That essay which accumulates the most votes will be declared the winner. All entrants will be advised of the result by email on 1st November.

*All essays submitted will be displayed on the site www.writersdisplay.com
Publishers of journals and newspapers will be invited to contact writers directly if they wish to publish any essay. 

Howard says: "My motives in choosing the theme for this competition are genuine. I am concerned at where we, as individuals, communities or nations are heading (or being led). Rather than structure a short-story competition or something similar, I am hoping that the competition will generate essays that will make people stop and think. 

"I will also be working to ensure that magazines, newspapers and the like take an interest and will be encouraging them to publish and pay writers a fee for doing so."

There's a small entry fee. Howard explains: "To keep things simple I've kept the price the same for both submissions to the site and for entry to the competition, namely, AUD$11.00. (ie.US$7.00, € 8.00 or £5.00) - although the cost, in effect, is much cheaper given that the essays will be on display right up to November 1st whereas submissions are $11.00 per month."

For further details contact hspicer@bigpond.net.au
Howard's web site: www.writersdisplay.com

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7. Writing Tip by Joanne Hoople (Canada) 
Writer and TBW forum member/moderator Joanne Hoople is Art Montague's wife. She handles Art's marketing and maintains his web site -
www.amontague.homestead.com You can email Joanne at arts-place@rogers.com

WRITING TIP by Joanne Hoople

TIP: Ask yourself these questions from time to time, and answer as honestly as you can.

1. Why do I write? 

There are almost as many answers as writers although many feel this is where their talent lies, and thus, that it would be a mistake not to use it, or at least to try. 

2. Who do I write for? Myself, or others?

Chances are, if you're attracted to the Web, you already have an answer, or you think you do. Your answer affects how well your writing communicates (or doesn't). If your motive is self-serving, it is bound to show.

3. What do I want from my writing? 

"Marketing" normally means selling a product for monetary returns, but for a writer, this may not always be the case. It may mean making your product available to others ("exposure"), and perhaps in so doing, to learn, through feedback, how effectively you communicate in whatever medium or genre you select. 

"Promotion" is simply finding ways to reach as wide an audience of readers as possible, the better to judge your product's merits or universal appeal.

4. Is my writing the best it can be?

Just as a manufacturer has to improve his product from time to time for better sales, you can always improve your writing, whether it be fiction, poetry, essays, or whatever. 

Support and encouragement from family and friends may get you started, but it doesn't count for much when you are taking on a bunch of strangers They may be critical of your style, your grammar, your spelling, your choice of words, even your logic. Treat their criticism constructively, if possible, and try to make your writing the best it can be, even if this means taking time out from your schedule for a course or two. 

After all, unless you write only for yourself, the real business of writing is communication! 

Copyright © Joanne Hoople

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8. Market News
WOMAN'S WORLD:

Can't find guidelines for Woman's World?

1. They purchase "Whodunnits" or "Howdunnits" of 1,000 words and pay $500 per mystery. 

2. They also buy contemporary romances of 1,500 words - $1,000 per romance

3. They retain First North American Serial Rights for six months after publication. 

Send manuscripts to: Fiction Editor, Woman's World, 270 Sylvan Ave., Englewood Cliffs, NJ 07632. Indicate Mini Mystery or Romance on the envelope. 

Woman's World say: "Get to know us: Please familiarize yourself thoroughly with our romances and mini mysteries before submitting your work."
Guidelines for "Woman's World" can be found in Writer's Market.com

TAKE A BREAK (submitted by Joanne Hoople):

"Take a Break": They are looking for stories of about 1,100 words to fill their 'Coffee Break' fiction slot: sharp, succinct with good plots and a 'twist in the tail' ending. Keep the number of characters to a minimum (certainly no more than four) and make your main character a woman. Submit to: Norah McGrath, Take a Break, 25-27 Camden Road, London NW1 9LL. Tel: 0207 284 0909.

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9. Bahamas Writer Sections:
"Getting Paid" section completed and on line at www.bahamaswriter.com/gettingpaid.htm

Just two more sections to go!

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10. Write The Bahamas Writer
RODERICK McKENZIE (BAHAMAS) 

Nassau writer and TBW forum member Roderick McKenzie is a Sergeant in the Royal Bahamas Police Force. He wrote TBW:

"I am a writer of Christian based articles that have already been published in three of our major news papers in the Bahamas every other week in the religious section. I feel that my work is good enough to be published on an international scale to teach Christians and persons who wish to become Christians worldwide. However I see where Christian writing is not always looked at on the international market the way it is viewed in the Bahamas." 

"How can you assist me in this venture and what advice can you give me to help me get my work out to the world?"

 

TBW has been happy to recommend ways Roderick might adapt his writing for international markets. TBW forum members have also posted their comments and marketing tips.

Roderick's email: roddie30@hotmail.com

 

LINDA COUSINS (U.S.A.)

Writer/Educator and TBW forum member Linda Cousins of New York wrote TBW about the review by e-book columnist, Julie Amari-Bandele, of Linda's e-book ("the first multimedia book on Junkanoo") - SELAH, PAPA LOU2, AND JUNKANOO! 

Linda said: "The work features a family's travel to Nassau where they enthusiastically connect to Junkanoo, Junkanoo culture-bearers, and Bahamian culture (and cuisine!) in general.

The e-book is enlivened by Junkanoo music, poetry, and graphics as well as a brief video clip and Junkanoo slideshow." 

Linda said Julie Amari-Bandele e-mailed her:

"Dear Linda,

"I really enjoyed your book! When I clicked on the different links my 
daughter actually abandoned the tv for once and ran over to the computer. 
It was great since the only toy that she usually will choose over the tv is 
her miniature goombay drum..."

Julie Amari-Bandele's review can be read at http://sellwritingonline.com/colpierc1.html

Further information on SELAH, PAPA LOU2, and JUNKANOO, Junkanoo history, and Junkanoo contributors can be found at: www.ancestraltravels.com 
Email Linda at Akan@aol.com

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*Guidelines for submissions to TBW
Please keep the number of words for articles and stories within 1,000 words and market tips within 300 if possible (unless you can provide a link back to your web site). 

Use single spacing with one line space between paragraphs. Put "TBW Submission" in the subject line of your email. 

Do "Grammar and Spell Check" (TBW may have to edit material for clarity).

Topics should not be political, involve sensitive issues, be inflammatory, pornographic or objectionable. 

The Bahamas Writer does not necessarily agree with and is not responsible for any of the views and/or content submitted to issues of this publication. 

Contributors' submissions must be their own composition. The Bahamas Writer is not responsible for any copyright infringes by contributors.

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